They had only met and he was into her. Her number was on Facebook. He decided to flirt a bit; he would go for the scare.
“I know what you did last summer.” He texted. “How do you know about the operation?” read the reply.
In hindsight, he did figure she had a husky voice.
“I know what you did last summer.” He texted. “How do you know about the operation?” read the reply.
In hindsight, he did figure she had a husky voice.
Effectively written!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sanjana. Glad you liked it.
ReplyDeleteCan't for the life of me think of what is wrong with this piece?
ReplyDeleteSorry Ashish, I tried hard but couldn't pinpoint on anything.
It is so cleverly written!!
The suspense so nicely hidden till it is revealed.
I am craving for more!
Bring it on.
P.S. Will comment on your previous post.
Hey Hey. I didn't reveal anything. I only led people to conclusions; and most, I guess, made the conclusion I assumed they would. In a different long lost world, the conclusion would be much different. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you for the great review. Waiting for your thoughts on the more serious previous article. :)